Hi Letty, Wow, excellent video! You must have looked for a long time choosing photos, as the wide selection really told your story. I am guessing you have been Commador for 2 years. I use to sail on a friend's 22 foot capri (I think that was it.) We raced a bit in lakes--Clear Lake was the most exciting where we damn near broached--but spilled the sails just in time. Deb
Letty, I really liked your video. It really told a story of the past and the present! Great job. If I had to make one suggestion it would be that sometimes the font was difficult to read, but other than that it was awesome! Anika
This is rad because it really told a coherent story which is something not many of us did with this assignment. I really applaud you for that. One suggestion would be to watch how quickly the slides transition when we need to read text. there are some that are easy to read, and there are others where I had to stop, rewind, and see what you had said. Its not a huge deal, but it does break up the immersion in your story.
Thanks for the feedback everyone--I really did struggle with the text--both readability of font and length of slide. Finally I just needed to turn in it and wash my hands of it!
Thanks Letty, good video, enjoyable. In using text, think about contrast, light on dark such as yellow, white, on dark backgrounds. Also another thing to learn to adjust is the length of time text stays on the screen. I will have to provide a short video in WLM about this.
Hi Letty,
ReplyDeleteWow, excellent video! You must have looked for a long time choosing photos, as the wide selection really told your story. I am guessing you have been Commador for 2 years.
I use to sail on a friend's 22 foot capri (I think that was it.) We raced a bit in lakes--Clear Lake was the most exciting where we damn near broached--but spilled the sails just in time.
Deb
Letty,
ReplyDeleteI really liked your video. It really told a story of the past and the present! Great job. If I had to make one suggestion it would be that sometimes the font was difficult to read, but other than that it was awesome!
Anika
This is rad because it really told a coherent story which is something not many of us did with this assignment. I really applaud you for that. One suggestion would be to watch how quickly the slides transition when we need to read text. there are some that are easy to read, and there are others where I had to stop, rewind, and see what you had said. Its not a huge deal, but it does break up the immersion in your story.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the feedback everyone--I really did struggle with the text--both readability of font and length of slide. Finally I just needed to turn in it and wash my hands of it!
ReplyDeleteThanks Letty, good video, enjoyable. In using text, think about contrast, light on dark such as yellow, white, on dark backgrounds. Also another thing to learn to adjust is the length of time text stays on the screen. I will have to provide a short video in WLM about this.
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